tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post6899755250343101582..comments2024-03-27T05:15:13.440-04:00Comments on * Author Karen Amanda Hooper*: FIRST SHORT FICTIONkahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post-4939592352144760832009-05-21T17:04:38.535-04:002009-05-21T17:04:38.535-04:00Karen, I've given you a blog award. You can view i...Karen, I've given you a blog award. You can view it <A HREF="http://theinnocentflower.blogspot.com/2008/04/my-blog-awards.html" REL="nofollow">here</A> on my blog. Just scroll down to the end of the post to the "Proximity" award for directions and more information about the award.<br /><br />Thanks for a great blog!Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post-35297426846098136472009-05-19T19:53:21.223-04:002009-05-19T19:53:21.223-04:00I just wanted to hop in here and say I LOVED THIS!...I just wanted to hop in here and say I LOVED THIS! At first I thought she was just dreaming but then I realized that she was in the place you go to between lives. How very, very amazing. I liked the part about how he “threw in a zigzag zooshy thing.” Isn’t that how it feels sometimes, that someone else is at the controls and every now and then gives you an extra zigzag zooshy thing. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08049539691005734933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post-34804873226574971822009-05-19T17:20:07.905-04:002009-05-19T17:20:07.905-04:00I really enjoyed reading this story. there were a ...I really enjoyed reading this story. there were a few "tummy" incidents, Karen knows what I mean by that, and it's a good thing trust me =)<br />I like the roller coaster image here too.<br />It's so funny, I was napping yesterday after work and woke up with this strange imagery and thoughts in my head. This rarely happens, but I thought to myself, wow that would make a good but creepy little story. A few minutes later i get an email from Karen explaining her discovery of flash fiction, with this story attached... Just thought that was cool, not sure if there's a connection there or not.<br />Not that I can ever see myself writing, I'm the musician and the web designer, Karen is most definitely the author ;-)<br />Although, seeing the work she put's into this blog, she's catching up to me in the web department =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post-75981969019390828362009-05-19T14:37:00.000-04:002009-05-19T14:37:00.000-04:00What a wonderful way to view life. I loved the sim...What a wonderful way to view life. I loved the similes--no overkill. Fit well and help make the story come alive. Bravo!<br />*Liz W.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post-84963105359209315812009-05-19T11:54:00.000-04:002009-05-19T11:54:00.000-04:00Beautifully written. I like the cotton candy smile...Beautifully written. I like the cotton candy smile :)Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10014195715998913268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post-65132518449810881772009-05-19T11:51:00.000-04:002009-05-19T11:51:00.000-04:00This is awesome! You're a great storyteller!This is awesome! You're a great storyteller!MeganRebekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285116194891827858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3302980868146183599.post-18175680342569639912009-05-19T11:42:00.000-04:002009-05-19T11:42:00.000-04:00This is a great story, Karen!! And perfect for th...This is a great story, Karen!! And perfect for the speculative fiction market. Full of evocative images and beauty. Awesome job. :) Let me know how it goes!B.J. Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10767654810069240472noreply@blogger.com